It's not a good song UNLESS it has Chris's old man HRRRNNGGH noise. XD You have succeeded at winning the mission.
I think what you should do is put all other projects aside and focus on this song until it's completed. This song is full of excellent melodies! This song makes me want to dance! This song makes me want to smile and sing! This song makes me want to tear up a little bit! It's upbeat yet sort of melancholy which are qualities I always look for in a dance song. Not to mention epic! The only thing it's lacking is length. I honestly feel you've truly found your style with this song. This song is nothing but Chris and it is awesome!
This is heavy!!
This is better than a lot of the newer industrial stuff I've been hearing lately!
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